Can someone review my copy 'teardown' and give some feedback?

[hesh_fekry]

Had a look and 2 of our users have already created these two playbooks. I would compare how they did theirs and see if you can supplement yours with it.

Conduct a sales page copy teardown

Quantify the persuasive power of your existing copy and identify improvement opportunities.

Conduct a conversion copy teardown of a sales page

Improve your sales page conversion rate – spot improvements and missing copy elements.

Happy to take another look afterwards